Haiku #4

Soft asleep, auburn
Hair frames eyes shuttering dreams.
Snow falls in silence.


2 Responses to Haiku #4

  1. 179 Danielle December 10, 2006 8:29am

    I enjoyed your haiku alot. I have read some that focus on form alone and you brought out the rasa of the moment caught within the poem and also of the form itself.

    Well done

    Thank you

  2. 47 Rick Cockrum December 10, 2006 5:21pm

    Thank you, Danielle.

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