Tanka #1

April 7th, 2007 by Richard Cockrum

One moment, one blink,
One beat, stacked one upon one.
Born in the lapse of
The synapse. Neurons jostle.
Eternity bound by life.

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5 Responses to “Tanka #1”

  1. Trevor Says:

    Hi there Rick - great new theme on your blog. Love the pcture - really relaxing and peaceful.

  2. Rick Cockrum Says:

    Thanks, Trevor. The picture is from one my son took near Venice, Florida. He has some other good ones at High Resolution Wallpapers.

  3. nicole Says:

    Hi, I really like your article on emotional addictions. I am in the process of publishing my book pertaining to this issue as well as I have developed a workshop regarding abuse and emotional addiction. I would love to discuss this matter with your organization further.
    Nicole

  4. Dereck Coatney Says:

    Oh Richard, this is a gem.

    Once I teased out one thing, another one followed, then another.

    Then another.

    I continued this delightful little dance with these lines, being teased, while I teased.

    Would you mind if I offered a commentary on this poem on my blog? Or, would you prefer that I send it to you beforehand for an endorsement?

  5. Richard Cockrum Says:

    You’re more than welcome to offer a commentary of the poem on your site, Derek. There’s no need to send it to me beforehand for an endorsement. That would be like a film reviewer getting a director’s approval before publishing a movie review. :) I’ll be by to read it after you’re done. I enjoy seeing what people find in my work.

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